Monday, October 15, 2007

RAIN ON THE WATER




Rain lines, close, slanting
Upon the pond
Like tail bones of fish.
They prick the water
Ovals surround dots,
Breaking, pairs of curves
Like ear rims they form.

Who's prancing on roof
The fishes wonder,
Who's stained its mirror
Guesses peeping sky.

3 comments:

Kalyan said...

lovely words...you have crafted it so beautifully ...nice poem!

floots said...

great stuff
especially that last stanza
thank you

Deva said...

You are strong in geometric and object metaphors. Keep it going!