Friday, February 1, 2008

Graceful Might

Elephant in water,
Its raised curved trunk
A lagoon, sending out
Fountain from its tip -
Actually relieving
Congestion in musth gland.

Ground shakes, stars will descend
On earth, trees lean away
To make space, actually
Elephant has just walked.

7 comments:

Deva said...

When we were in our teens there was a popular musical theme from the wildlife film 'Hatari' called Baby Elephant Walk and our big built friend Hati Banerjee used to dance to this. But this is certainly a much bigger Bull Elephant Walk! Quite expressive.

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ф roy ф said...

Hi,

What a way to say: trees lean away To make space

one thing can you think different word for "descend" in the line "stars will descend
On earth". No, no its nt my opinion, I just thought maybe you can write that part better.

Nice to land here.

cheers.
roy

Subhadip said...

There is poetry or art(u can say) in a broader sense in everything. You just have to have the eye to see it. This poetry signifies that.

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